Thesis: Ernesto's journey throughout South America in The Motorcycle Diaries revealed the futility of his efforts to help people as a doctor and transformed him into a guerrilla named Che.
I like it. I can't say that I would change anything about it. Do you plan on including anything about the future and relating it, or just focusing on the book?
I like your thesis ... very simple and to the point. Does not leave the reader with questions and this will help you outline exactly what you want to describe throughout your essay.
Very nice. It is not too complex to be able to relate everything back together. I am interested to see which facts and analysis you use to help explain your thesis.
I like it. I can't say that I would change anything about it. Do you plan on including anything about the future and relating it, or just focusing on the book?
ReplyDeleteI like your thesis ... very simple and to the point. Does not leave the reader with questions and this will help you outline exactly what you want to describe throughout your essay.
ReplyDeleteVery nice. It is not too complex to be able to relate everything back together. I am interested to see which facts and analysis you use to help explain your thesis.
ReplyDeleteWell written. There is not much constructive criticism i can give you, i think you can use it just the way it is. Good job.
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